Tuesday, December 05, 2006

God, Can You Hear Me

God, Can You Hear Me???

I found God stretched out on the sidewalk.
He laid face down on the concrete
Hair muddled in a pool of blood,
Breath barely present,
An inkling of life still in his eyes.

There was God, dying on the sidewalk
With countless people walking by.
No one dared to touch him, or even look his way.
So I sprinted to God’s side and I asked him
“God! God! Can you hear me?”
He murmured, “ Indeed. I hear you.”
I rolled God onto his back and asked,
“Who did this to you?”
”The people,” he said. “The people did this to me.”

Now I was confused and confound
Because I was used to God being the most powerful around.
So sitting on the sidewalk,
I held God in my arms.
He whispered in my ear, telling me stories
Of how he walked with Adam in the garden
And flooded the earth with his liquid fury,
His conversation with Moses on the mount.
He shared with me his memoirs of Babylon and her gardens
And how he cried when his son died.
Then he talked to me for a few more moments.
While he whispered to me the secrets of the universe
He died
Right there in my arms he died.
No one noticed
The entity that created the world, destroyed it, and renewed it again
Died
Right there in my arms.
And no one noticed.

9 comments:

Lyrically speaking said...

Wow, what a scene! very moving, eye-catching yet sad piece

NegroPino™ said...

Great read

Ms.Honey said...

WOW....who did you steal this from LOL..sike I'm jokin

Wonderful :)

Sangindiva said...

WOW...

I really liked this!
It was so moving...powerful.

DEEEEEEEP:

"I held God in my arms.
He whispered in my ear, telling me stories
Of how he walked with Adam in the garden
And flooded the earth with his liquid fury,
His conversation with Moses on the mount.
He shared with me his memoirs of Babylon and her gardens
And how he cried when his son died.
Then he talked to me for a few more moments.
While he whispered to me the secrets of the universe
He died"

Don't Oppress Me said...

I know I sound goofy but...that was deep. I don't think I could deal with God dying on me, I think I'd need some therapy for that shit.

*snake*bite* said...

Deep

xxS*Bxx

CNEL said...

Is this ur writing 4real?

kathi said...

What is this? Poem, a song? Where'd you get it? It's a powerful and thought provoking read.

Bliss said...

Grace and Peace

I dare to say, what profound message your piece could carry, if only you let it go. "Deep" is corny and expected. Conscious...that is what I say.

Peace

Bliss